Assignment 10A: Elevator Pitch No. 1



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  1. If you can, maybe put the camera at a higher angle. You could include some facts about how many people go kayaking/canoeing in the US on average, or mention the potential square feet it would add in addition to what it could hold. Instead of "however long it take to get to the beach", you could put " You drive all the way to the beach". I think it would sound a bit better. Other than that I think it's a pretty good pitch.

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