Assignment 22A: Elevator Pitch No. 3
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. All of the feedback that I received from my last post was positive and acknowledged that the changes I made from the first pitch enhanced the pitch a lot. I added some facts about how many people went kayaking in 2017 and had a more cohesive pitch. I think that the second pitch was a lot better than the first because I already knew what I wanted to say and made it more conversational rather than formal. 3) What did you change, based on the feedback? Based on the feedback from the last pitch, I did not change too many things. I added the uses for my product such as how it can be used both residentially as in it can be bought by the general public and commercially such as through kayak rental companies. I think my second pitch was better than this one for the sole purpose of that it was a lot more off the top of my head than written down and flowed a lot better....